tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post8023866372900472946..comments2023-12-31T11:28:31.953-05:00Comments on The Surly Writer: The remainderMichelle H.http://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-34568984170133782982009-04-01T13:27:00.000-04:002009-04-01T13:27:00.000-04:00So sad. (Maybe the idea of reading a lot of your p...So sad. (Maybe the idea of reading a lot of your posts in one go wasn't such a good one, hehe. I'm on an emotional rollercoster now. <BR/>Ah well, upwards and onwards.)Carolinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09288856854422999687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-55076670500848514942009-03-25T11:16:00.000-04:002009-03-25T11:16:00.000-04:00Angie: Yay! Glad you liked it.Angie: Yay! Glad you liked it.Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-41939527449985492662009-03-24T10:40:00.000-04:002009-03-24T10:40:00.000-04:00I enjoyed that, Michelle!I enjoyed that, Michelle!Angie Ledbetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16407006980893727627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-63826032878186535712009-03-24T09:32:00.000-04:002009-03-24T09:32:00.000-04:00Chris: Thanks! Glad you liked it. I don't mind swe...Chris: Thanks! Glad you liked it. I don't mind swearing, but it can be overdone.Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-84285235501513348282009-03-23T14:44:00.000-04:002009-03-23T14:44:00.000-04:00oh. just saw your comment on swearing. i didn't ...oh. just saw your comment on swearing. i didn't notice it. and usually i do if its gratuitous.Chris Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02843546323461336020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-40684887478253947282009-03-23T14:42:00.000-04:002009-03-23T14:42:00.000-04:00Very good Michelle. so sad!Very good Michelle. so sad!Chris Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02843546323461336020noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-23693140083843528712009-03-23T08:57:00.000-04:002009-03-23T08:57:00.000-04:00Buck: Thanks! I'm trying to connect with people in...Buck: Thanks! I'm trying to connect with people in this work, have them nodding their head knowing how it goes yet still putting in something strange to get their interest.<BR/><BR/>Jeni: I like the dialogue also, although I'm going to cut back on some of the swearing. I don't want to overuse it until it starts to become trite and predictable.<BR/><BR/>Eric: I like the storyline, but there's a lot of editing I have to work on. As for the long posts, I usually keep myself strictly down at 1200-1500 words per post whenever I get the urge. But I blew that with the "Idea Page" post - a whooping 2300words. It's the reason I separated the parts into two... that and because another blogger asked to see the rest of the chapter.<BR/><BR/>Lyn: Thanks kindly!<BR/><BR/>Oren: A 10? I'm flattered considering all the misspelled words and overinflated parts. I never tried posting unedited work before.Michelle H.https://www.blogger.com/profile/10117937124348728578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-88376229550432364412009-03-23T06:25:00.000-04:002009-03-23T06:25:00.000-04:00Hey Kiddo,Hit the 10 ring with this one. Very goo...Hey Kiddo,<BR/>Hit the 10 ring with this one. Very good and disturbing at the same time. <BR/>OrenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-75056078859736030072009-03-23T01:28:00.000-04:002009-03-23T01:28:00.000-04:00Wow, Michelle!!! Very well-written indeed. I could...Wow, Michelle!!! Very well-written indeed. I could feel every emotion of each character involved. Kudos to you!!!LyNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11133476585263075239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-81506535993118325382009-03-22T22:40:00.000-04:002009-03-22T22:40:00.000-04:00Wow, this is extremely well written. You've done ...Wow, this is extremely well written. You've done a good job of capturing the imagery of each character, the dialogue, the situations. I could actually feel emotions about each person, because of the way you depict them. That in itself says you've got it right. I have refrained from putting very long posts on my blog, because I was concerned that people wouldn't want to read that much in one sitting. But after reading this, I think I may just change my mind and follow your excellent example. Good job!Erichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07823808700523297184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-23088773988225463772009-03-22T21:08:00.000-04:002009-03-22T21:08:00.000-04:00WOW! Plain and simple, just WOW! Incredible descri...WOW! Plain and simple, just WOW! Incredible description and dialogue. I felt as if I were right there, observing like the fly on the wall type thing.Jenihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16425701332785470116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9169129998329537448.post-15218803746098623762009-03-22T18:07:00.000-04:002009-03-22T18:07:00.000-04:00Dark, Michelle, but VERY well-done. I saw some sc...Dark, Michelle, but VERY well-done. I saw some scenes from a previous life herein... and you wove the web perfectly.Buckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05319116022465066060noreply@blogger.com